I have a lot of goals this year. I want to be successful, I want to be someone important in life.
There's steps I'm going to have to take,so that i can get where i want to me.An can be very time consuming.
One of my goals are graduating high school.Something I have to do to get there is, have good attendance,go to every class,do all my assignments and make sure i complete my senior project and scrap book.
Another goal I have is getting my license to do hair. I want to be the one people always stalk about in a good way. Saying how good i do hair and how cute there hair is.So when someone ask who did there hair they can say Marika.I want to be known as the one who is one of the best at doing hair.
Proofread! Too many errors that take away from your message.
ReplyDeleteWhen you talk about your goals, it is good to also talk about your plan, but can you expand? Talk about why and how.
Still choppy and has some minor errors. Clean up.
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