Changes
There's a lot of changes taking a place. There's always a change,but that change can either be good or bad. A lot of the changes I've seen at Reitzs was for the good but students always some how seem to make it bad and not follow that change.But the biggest change I've seem was Uniforms and The wonderful net book.
Net books where a very big change when i got to high school.First thing i thought where.Yes we get mini laptops.But little did everybody know Facebook was blocked.So we went to gmail and where chatting but later on they blocked Google chat,tragic.So we found a better place it was google buzz but soon they blocked that.Before you knew everything was blocked.When we first got net books they where just a big distraction but they turned out to be educational.
Oh my lord the big Uniforms.I honestly think uniforms are a good thing to have in public schools. It stops a lot of bullying.People always talk about each other because there not up to date with the latest cloths. But the bad part about uniforms is the rules are a little out of control and honestly taken it out of proportion. Everything has to be solid and hood less.
You have some good ideas here and some good comments, but you missed the point of this assignment. This is supposed to be about your generation, not just locally.
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Proofread!!! Good ideas, but careless errors take away from the main points.
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