Have
you ever actually thought about your self,and words that describe
you? Some words that describe me are outgoing ,friendly,nice and
pretty.
I love
people,I will talk to just about anybody.But once your on my bad side
its not very pretty.I don't hold grudges because if you hold a grudge
it get you no where. Nine times out of ten nobody's thinking about
what and why you've done to them.
When i
finish high school one of the thing i want to do is become a Registered Nurse.The reason being is I love helping people exceptionally when there sick and in need of help.
I also want to go to hair school.Ive always loved doing hair. I can actually do it good. My dream is to own my own Beauty Shop.
I just really want to be somebody in life.So that when i have kids,they can have everything.
I also want to go to hair school.Ive always loved doing hair. I can actually do it good. My dream is to own my own Beauty Shop.
I just really want to be somebody in life.So that when i have kids,they can have everything.
Good start, but be careful of using a question to get started. It can lead to the audience answering it and not reading on.
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Nursing? Should we break it apart and expand on it?
Proofread!!! Too many errors.
Nice message, but a few errors.
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